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Rain

Rain, Rain and Rain,
on grounds and mountain,
on ordinary and main,
ubiquitous and ample,
like that God of temple,
mosque and cathedral.

Oh! I love this returning monsoon,
feeling relief from scorching sun.

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  1. November 19, 2010 at 1:37 am | #1

    cute piece.
    Thanks for sharing….

  2. November 19, 2010 at 5:34 am | #2

    This could be a metaphor for releasing pain … rain hides the tears from such a thing. Simple, but has great potentials.

  3. November 19, 2010 at 8:17 pm | #3

    Oh, how delightfully delicious. Makes me wish I could experience a monsoon. Well done.

    I’m here for Jingle’s Thursday Poets Rally. Hope you enjoy your visits and visitors.

    Poem on … Very fine work indeed. :-)

  4. November 22, 2010 at 12:33 pm | #4

    i agree with ljm on this one, i could easily think of metaphors here. but even if there were none, the poem is still very nice :)

  5. Ms. Peaches
    December 19, 2010 at 10:34 pm | #5

    great piece thanks for sharing!

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